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2012年12月12日水曜日

Essay 2-03b: Revised essays

 She is Hollywood star that we chose actress. She is Julia Roberts. Her real name is Julia Fiona Roberts. She is from Georgia the United States. And, she was born in 1967. She is 45 years old. She is a pretty famous actress all of the world. She is the leading actress in the United States, and she has appeared in a lot of movies, dramas, magazines, and the others. Especially, she has appeared in "Erin Brockovich", "Pretty Woman", "Eat Pray Love", and the others. She has won an Academy Award in the movies of "Erin Brockovich".

 She has a brother. He is "Eric Roberts", and he is an actor too. Her father and mother are actor and actress too. So, they are pretty famous family.
She is married to "Henry Daniel Moder". He is a movie cameraman. Of course, she has three children.


 First, This movie is "notting Hill". Notting Hill was drawn the love of the master of bookstore who is not clear and the Hollywood actress. This story's stage is the town of the common people called Notting Hill where really exists to the west of London. Julia Fiona Roberts plays the part of big Hollywood movie star, Anna Sccot. She is rich, beautiful and very famous.

 William managed the small bookstore which did not sell in Notting Hill. One day, world-famous Hollywood movie star, Anna Scott came over to the shop accidentally, his fate begins to change.
The second encounter is at a street corner of Notting Hill. He bought orange juice in a neighboring cafe, the condition of being on his way back to his house, he hit her and has polluted her clothes with juice. Then Anna changed her cloth in his house, she was touched by his sincerity. They kissed. It was hot kiss. After this, they kept up a relationship. Then, they overcame many hardships, finary, they came to love each other. It is very happy end.

 Notting Hill is a wonderful and very funny love story. The movie was absorbed to me for the first tine. Anna says "I'm also just a girl. Standing in front of a boy. Asking him to love her." If Hollywood star said such a thing for me, it would pulsate with excitement. And, the friendship and the love of friends are one of the main attractions of this story too. As a story, there are not virtually surprised, and it is a common, reverse Cinderella story, but a supporting actor and the side story excite this story more. "She" of the ending music flows movingly, too. This was a love story that I thought to be interesting purely, sincerely recommend this movie to everybody.


 Second, this movie is Ocean's Eleven. Ocean's Eleven is an American comedy crime caper in 2001. And, the movie is remake of the Ocean's Eleven in 1960. The movie is directed by Steven Soderbergh, and a lot of actors and actress cast in the movie including Julia Roberts. For example, the movie appears in George Clooney, Brad Pitt, Matt Damon, Don Cheadle, Andy García, and the others. The movie's main character is Danny Ocean. He is a thief. Julia's movie's name is Tess Ocean. She is a curator of the museum of Bellagio. And, she appears to the movie in the role of Danny Ocean's ex-girlfriend. She is associate with Terry Benedict. He is millionaire that manages to three casino. But, he is a real bad guys. He kill the person repugnant in cold blood. But, she doesn't know his real face. Eventually, she recognized that his real face, and she gets back with Danny Ocean again. Ocean's Eleven is a continued to Ocean's Twelve, and Ocean's Thirteen. 


 Next, this movie  is “Mirror Mirror”. This story is “Snow White and the Seven Dwarfs” another story version. This is the latest movie which she appeared. Julia Roberts act the part of Queen Clementianna, the evil stepmother of Snow White. Queen Clementinna is a narcissist. She hates Snow White, because Snow White is the most beautiful women in the country. She wanted to marry with Prince Andrew Alcott, because she wants to his huge estate, but Prince Andrew Alcott falls in love with Snow White. Queen Clementianna think will kill Snow White when she heard it. Snow White escaped to forest. She met the Seven Dwarf. They are very kind. Snow White practice the art of fencing for she defeats to the evil stepmother. She changed from a little princess to a hero by degrees. Theirs battle is very interesting. For example, Queen Clementinna think about she doesn’t want to lose for Snow White, so she went to the spa. She trained at a gym.


 Julia Roberts act the evil person the first, but she likes part who looks Queen Clementinna. She had never act the evil person right up to now. She enjoyed acting on camera. This film released in March 30, 2012 in United States. This film was directed by Tarsen Singh. He is very famous director. This film got an award. It is 2012 Teen Choice Awards Sci-Fi/Fantasy. This is excellent! Julia Robert is very good person.
 Julia Roberts is very famous actor in the world. These movies should be watched all over the world. 

2012年12月5日水曜日

Twilight

 This is love story. Bella moved to Forcus. She felt in love with Edward. He is very beautiful face. But he was vampire, continuing to live 100 years!!

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2012年7月4日水曜日

My language learning story


My language learning story
  • preschool
    • "Minerva" English conversation
      • talk with my English teacher
      • use a machinery and materials
  • Japanese
  • English
    • at elementary
    • junior high school
    • high school
    • university
  • German
    • at university
  • elementary school
    • cram school
    • my English class
  • junior high school
    • cram school
    • my English classe
  • high school
    • my English classes
      • normal class
      • orlal communication
  • university
    • my classes
      • writing
        • writing blog
          • my diary
          • book review
          • essay
        • typing homework
        • essay
      • reading
        • read English paper
      • listening
        • watch a movie
      • speaking
        • speech
        • talk with my classmate

2012年6月20日水曜日

Essay 1-02c: Welcome happy student life

There are many institution in KGU. Also There are many teachers and students. Students of K.G.U can live a full life. KGU is easy to spend for student. Many club activities and entertainment doing in KGU Also KGU has long history so you may be interested in KGU. University life has life is must be pleasant. many uneasiness but student of K.G.U everyone are gentle. I want  you know about this university. Then I want you enjoy everyday!! Also I think that KGU.

There is English Lounge in building 1 at KGU. You can meet and exchange ideas with many students from around world. You can speak many country people frequently. You will get good communication because there is many game, darts, a video game, an exhibition game. So you will be able to get along very well with anybody at once. I went to this lounge too, I could become familiar with them soon. This is a familiar place to me. You don't need to be worried. It is chance for you to enjoy better your KGU life.

Another, There is sports Jim at KGU. Everyone can use it very easily. You can train your body and help your health. By exercising, you heighten each organs ability because you use a heart, the lungs, a muscle hard. A result, various origans will make preparations for disease, a spontaneous cure. And it is very important for us to privent an overweight. It cause lifestyle related illnesses, as a cancer, high blood pressure, diabetes, cerebral infarction. It any case, exercising is very important in your health.

Other there is library in KGU. I use the library everyday. There are about eight hundred thousand books, the building with the second basement below and three above the ground. We are proud of the largest library in the west part of Japan very much. There open at 9:00 a.m ~ 23:00 p.m.  Of course, we can borrow many books, listing CD, watching many movie, reading English newspaper and magazine and so on!!! It is wonderful, isn't it? There provide many study space and some computer. We can use this library comfortable. You will spend your university life very much.

And, I introduce a convenience store, lowson. There open at 8:00 a.m ~ 22:00 p.m, We can use there on Saturday and Sunday. We use there every noon. There sell a rice ball, bread, pasta, instant noodles, sweets, ice cream, magazines and so on. My favorite food is "lowson chicken". The taste is normal and hot. It is very delicious. We eat lunch a   bench in front of lowson. That is chance to make many friends because there are many students.

And, You use bakery on lunch time. We use there once in a while. There are many kind of breads. The breads were baked bread everyday. So you can bread hot from the oven. It is delicious very much. There are many delicious bread the bakery. Therefor You can buy a yogurut, a salada and a drink there. A bread of one is very cheap in there. It is very glad for the student. Other KGU library is very useful. There are many function in the ribrary. Forexample, there are many kind of english newspaper  in 2F of the ribrary. You can read a fresh news. It is very nice! You should try to read it.

A hall of KGU holds many lecture. For example, Kanpei Hazama of gave a lecture, you should remenber this hall`s name because you may use it. If you want to listen to a lecture, you should go to fourteen terminal one floor. This hall is very large so I think that you should go with your friends. KGU is the seventeen anniversary. Home Coming Day of the seventeen anniversary hold in KGU. Home Coming Day can attend to a class. The exhibition hold there. There is completely a room of international student. There are many happy event at Home Coming Day.  You should take part in it!

One more thing is  an institution of computer is very useful. KGU has many computers. You can home work at the school. If you have not a computer, you can do reaport there.They will want to know the library. There are not only  many books but only to play DVD. You can use a computer so here. If you have free time you can enjoy there.A class of KGU use a big screen. There are large room from a little room. Please try it! The building of KGU is very large so I got lost at first but a diary of KGU has a map so it is very useful. The diary is indispesable item for student of KGU. It can understand an event, a time schedule and a calendar. For example, you can write your a part time job plan.

Students of KGU are very kind so If you have many question, Everyone student may save you. Also KGU has many consulate place. consultation of a scholarship can four terminal. They can easy to understand you. About University life is eleven terminal there are many materials. It may useful for you and helpful for you. Furthermore I want you ask me! I wish you every happiness!!! It is  makes your life exciting to spend in KGU.

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2012年4月25日水曜日

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